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I will always be here

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Another from my challenge, day 41.

I really love this photo, the message, the editing, the taking the photo, the young hands..

Anyway, comments or thoughts?

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Image size
2971x2010px 1.91 MB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D40
Shutter Speed
10/1250 second
Aperture
F/5.6
Focal Length
38 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Aug 11, 2010, 4:31:20 AM
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Really really gentle piece. I especially like the fact that's grayscale. The angle is good, as is the focus. Although it does seem a tiny bit fuzzy (just a little).
A little more depth of shadow would be good, I think.
If I'm honest, the background does seem a little... boring. It would be nice to make it slightly more interesting. I think it's important, even if it isn't the main focus of the piece.
I agree that the young hands make it seem better because it feels like true friendship can start from any age.
I especially like the fence being used to show a divide, but one that can be overcome. A really nice concept.
Overall, I think there is room for improvement but a great piece.